My free time activity is riding in bicycle, i used the bike in the week and weekend. A bicycle is an element that gives great benefits.
First a great benefit of the bicycle i can use it anytime, by bike a trip can shorten to the middle a bus trip, for example my trip to the universityis 35 minutes while by bus is 1 hour, it permits me arrive on time and with calm to the classes. Secondly, to have a bike is not difficult, is a chep and accesible transport, nowadays buying a bicycle is not expensive, there are of all prices and coloirs, being possible to have a bike without problems. In addition, a bike permits to have a better health, for example, you control stress, lose weight and do physical activity.
In conclusion a bicycle is a investment in health, helping to have more mental health and physical health, in autonomy, getting more independence to move in the city, as well as it allows a higher care of the enviroment.
Regards!!! and you prefer to move in bicycle!! e
My love!! how are you sweetheart? I hope you are well <3
ResponderBorrarI also use the bicycle a lot and I totally agree with you
(maybe that's why we got married *_*) It is interesting to calculate how much money you save by traveling by bike and not by public transport, besides you do not pollute the air :)
I Love U Natty
Hi beauty one :3 I don't have a bike but after read how much you enjoy to have one I'm thinking a lot of it. <3 <3 <3
ResponderBorrarHi Natalia!!how are u??
ResponderBorrarRiding bike is a great activity, I used to ride bike all week, everyday . I loved it.
I remember I used to put my headphones on and let's go !!!!
Bike it's a excellent way to excercise the body, regards!!!
It´s a very good post. The bicycle is the best conveyance that exist in the actuality. Your comment about the time and the money, is more important for choose the bicycle as a means of transport.
ResponderBorrarTS: My free time activity is riding in bicycle,
ResponderBorrarSS1: [i] I use[d] [the] MY bike in the week and ON THE weekend.
EXP:A bicycle is an element that gives great benefits.(THIS IS A MUCH BETTER TOPIC SENTENCE)
SS2: First a great benefit of the bicycle iS I (ALWAYS NEED A SUBJECT, "I" IN THIS CASE) can use it anytime[,];
EXP: [by bike a trip can shorten to the middle a bus trip] A BUS TRIP CAN BE SHORTENED TO THE MIDDLE IF YOU TRAVEL BY BIKE
(THIS SHOULD BE YOUR SUPPORTING SENTENCE, BECAUSE THEN YOU REFER TO IT.
EX: for example my trip to the universitySPACEis 35 minutes LONG, while by bus IT is 1 hour[,] SO it [permits] HELPS me arrive on time and [with calm] RELAXEDLY to the classes.
SS3:Secondly, to have a bike is not difficult, IT is a cheAp and accesible MEANS OF transport,
EXP:nowadays buying a bicycle is not expensive, there are of all prices and coloU[i]rs, MAKING IT [being] possible to have a bike without problems.
EXP: In addition, a bike permits to have a better health, for example, you control stress, lose weight and do physical activity.
C: In conclusion a bicycle is aN investment in health, helping to have more mental health and physical health, in autonomy, getting more independence to move in the city, as well as it allows a higher care [of] FOR the enviroNment.
GOOD TRY NATALIA, YOUR TEXT STILL NEEDS MORE WORK THOUGH.