Hello! i speaking about a problem that affect deeply
our society today, is the “sexism”, I think that is a great problem because
stopping the same development between
men and women, for example, a woman earn a 30% less that a man making the same job,
or that for being woman, you are exposed to being victim of workplace harassment. The access to education is other point, the difference as you
reciving education, for example that some subjects the boys is “the best” as
math and science, and for the women only remain the humanities or art, but even
the men to have more oportunities for development in any area of knowledge.
A form of figth the sexism is through education,
educate from equality of that men and women are equal, just so we can having a
healthy society and fair. Give the same opportunities is really important for
create a best society. Eradicate
the sexism is goodwill of all .
Regards!
Regards!
It seems to me a very positive text. Undoubtedly education is extremely necessary to eradicate these practices and actions that maintain the machismo in Chile. Another example is the gap in the university selection test.
ResponderBorrarA hug and happy holidays.
we have to create a better and healthy society my love, sexism and the gender role is a very old topic in the humankind! it's already a lot
ResponderBorrarif you want visit my entry about sexism ----> http://mikefaithman.blogspot.cl/2016/05/sexism-old-problem-as-humanity_25.html#comment-form
see you soon my girl
Hello! [i] [I speaking about]
ResponderBorrarTS:THERE IS a problem that affectS deeply our society today, THAT is [the] “sexism”,
COMMENT: I think that is a great problem because IT stopS[ping] the same development between men and women,
EX:for example, a woman earnS a 30% less that a man [making] DOING the same job, or that for being woman, you are exposed to being A victim of workplace harassment.
SS2:The access to education is ANother point, the difference as you recEivE[ing] education,
EX:for example [that] IN some subjects [the] boys [is] ARE “the best” as math and science, and for [the] women only remain the humanities or THE artS, [but even the men to have more oportunities for development in any area of knowledgeUNCLEAR.]
SS2:A form of figHTING[th the] sexism is through education, [educate] from equality [of] that men and women are equal, just so we can haviE[ng] a 1)healthy 3)society 2)and fair.
C?GivING[e] the same opportunities is really important [for] create a [best] BETTER society. EradicatING[e] [the] sexism is goodwill of all .
Natalia, your structure was not so clear for me as a reader, a problem in the edition and grammar correction didn't help.